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Chapter One: Bubblegum and Butterflies by Lynette Ferreira


Perfect was exhausting.

Charlize van der Merwe studied her reflection in the girls’ bathroom mirror. Even though the mirror gave her a vignetted effect because the edges around the mirror were darker than the centre, the flickering fluorescent lights above her gave her face a lens flare look and she could see herself in stark detail. She adjusted her school blazer until it sat just right on her shoulders and tucked in her crips white shirt so that there were no crinkles in sight. Leaning closer to the mirror, she tucked a strand of her golden hair behind her ear. She inspected every detail. Her flawless French braid, her pale pink lip gloss, and even the delicate curve of her lashes. Stepping back from the mirror it looked as if her reflection was the image of pure, effortless perfection but she knew better. Nothing about her life was effortless.

The bathroom door gave a haunted moan as it squeaked open, and Charlize immediately brightened her expression, slipping on the perfect smile she had perfected long ago and with a lot of practice.

Amy and Jessica tumbled in. The sound of their giggles bounced off the bathroom’s stark white tiles and the sound of their shoes tapped rhythmically on the pale green linoleum.

“There you are,” Amy said loudly. Her tone held an unmistakable mix of forced enthusiasm and anticipation. They were friends but not good friends. Charlize did not have any real friends. “We’ve been looking everywhere for you. Did you hear about Sarah’s party this weekend?”

Charlize’s eyes flickered with suppressed excitement as she applied another coat of her pale pink gloss. The strawberry sweet scent filled the air, and for a moment it masked the mix of bleach and cheap hand-soap. “Of course,” she said. “I’ve already cleared it with my mom.” She did not mention the twenty minutes of begging and pleading, and lectures about how to socialise responsibly, as well as all the promises of keeping her grades immaculate. Amy and Jessica would never understand. Charlize was sure they never had to fight for permission to do the simplest things.

The shrill sound of the first bell vibrated through the bathroom.

Charlize gathered her bag, feeling the weight of expectations settle heavy on her shoulders but it felt like a familiar heavy jacket.

As they slipped from the bathroom into the crowded corridor of Vaalriver High School, the familiar noise of Monday morning filled the air. Laughter and shouted greetings surrounded them. It seemed as if everyone was still excited from the rugby match against their biggest rival from Saturday where, by the sound of it, Vaalriver High won by scoring a lot of tries.

Charlize barely registered the noise. Her day was planned from start to finish. Classes, a student council meeting, and then three hours of studying for her chemistry test tonight after dinner. A slip in her grades would be unacceptable.

Then she heard him.

The unmistakable rumble of skateboard wheels on concrete cut through the hallway noise.

Charlize turned, more out of instinct than curiosity, just in time to catch Daniel McCarthy, the school’s resident troublemaker, rolling up to the school entrance on his skateboard. His shirt, though technically the same as everyone else’s, hung untucked, his top button was rebelliously undone. His dark hair fell across his face, obscuring one eye, and he moved with an ease Charlize could not help but notice, as though he could not care less about the rules everyone else, especially her, lived by.

As he walked down the corridor with his skateboard tucked under his arm, whispers followed him, passing from student to student. Rumours about Daniel were as much a fixture here as was the brick walls of the school. Each story that was told was darker and more dramatic than the last.

Charlize tore her eyes away from him. She had a carefully maintained reputation to uphold, a flawless attendance record to maintain, and no time for the likes of Daniel McCarthy.

“Did you finish the chem homework?” Amy’s voice jerked Charlize back to reality as they slipped into their seats. The question reminded her of the countless hours she had invested in every assignment.

“Of course.” Charlize opened her notebook, revealing perfectly colour-coded notes with every equation meticulously highlighted. “Need to check your answers?”

Amy nodded gratefully, accepting the offered notebook. Charlize felt a small surge of satisfaction. These were the moments when everything felt in place, where she could measure herself by her accomplishments, and her carefully organised life.

Outside the classroom window, the hills surrounding their small South African Karoo town held her gaze. The view stirred something strange in her. There was a tugging feeling that whispered maybe there was more than this. More than the endless chase for academic perfection. How many times has she sat at this same desk, looking out of this same window, planning a trip up the hill. To walk up that steep incline and have a little picnic up there admiring the view from above. To look down, instead of always looking up.

The second bell rang, and Mrs Naidoo’s voice called the class to order, pulling her back to the familiar routine.

Charlize straightened in her chair, pen poised, ready to be the girl everyone expected her to be. She tried to push away the hollow ache that lurked beneath her polished exterior. The small whisper that wondered if maybe, just maybe, she could ever be something other than perfect.

** Chapter updated: 18/02/2025







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